summer in December

[Serenna]

you had your cold bitter summer
in our Decemeber
that really wasn't ours after all
and you kept your summer a secret
for I should not have known
about your cruel season you indulged in and
I must have been your cool winter,
your brisk autumn or
your new spring
for i was not your summer this December
as i must i have tasted your shared lips
but i've never tasted lies
or deceit
or her
so i was unknowing
in your tasting
your summer
in our bitter December

[machinery]

wow..great ending..and it stabbed....this was truly painful....

[Trevor Vincent]

Wow...powerful and very good. I loved the way it flowed and the way you used your words. "for i was not your summer this December/as i must i have tasted your shared lips" These two lines really got me. I loved the way you said you had tasted shared lips. Great work.

[Zeik Blaine]

I like your stuff. You are very creative and a powerfull writer, I saw that you are from Macomb, I was wondering do you go to WIU. Get back to me.

[Serenna]

Yes, Zeik, i do go to wiu and you know me very well...as i know you. thanks for responding.

[machinery]

blah blah blah...Macomb Macomb and a basket of chicken wings, battered in gravy and wednesday grease we are all payroll tickets in this sunshine side spin...bah bah bah......

Macomb? Bah!